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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-11-27 04:30 PM


I start at the top
wend my way slowly downward
meanderingly
~*~
stopping here and there
pausing at points of int’rest
resumption of quest
~*~
occupied by toes
five digits in need of me
now back to the top

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-27 04:40 PM


Oh my gosh........this one will burn the skin of all us ladies. Very well done. Filled with passion and desire. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-27 04:41 PM


meander slowly
enjoying the scenic route
use the braille map

lunatic
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3 posted 2001-11-27 04:50 PM


Startime - I don't want to burn anyone.  Maybe warm their hearts a little and bring a smile and thoughts of love.

SEA-
tactile scenery
interpreted by my mind
desiring input

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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4 posted 2001-11-27 04:55 PM


Ah but I so enjoyed your poem and Sea's comment, braille indeed!  This was sure food for thought I tell you  

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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5 posted 2001-11-27 05:02 PM


Fantastic!  May I have more please???  
Just love meandering lips......
hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2001-11-27 05:27 PM


let lips rain kisses
on fleshy topography
starting passion's storm

lunatic
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7 posted 2001-11-28 10:20 AM


Mysteria - Yes, food for thought. Hmmmm.  Wonder if I am up for it?

Enchantress - More?  OK, look for your post, soon

SEA -
dewdrops beading up
silken skin soaked in moisture
passion's evidence

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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