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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-11-22 06:37 PM

Missing you notes scatter about my soul
as I can dream of only touching your heart.
As I need a little easy drink to clear my mind,
I am feeling how much you affect me.
Get
D
O
W
N
Just curtain yourself in my corners
while I kiss you beneath intricately woven word canvases.
And think of me while I leave my voice
with clues to my love.
Treasure hunt with me.

~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-22 07:13 PM

Very romantic and very lovely. A perfect read for today. Wonderful

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-22 09:07 PM

you mean, this isn't the treasure??

a little something, eh?? well, it is lovely. . . and full of wonderful thoughts. . . great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-11-22 09:37 PM

You know I love this.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-22 09:38 PM

Oh Jenn this one loves me!! Yuppers!
AND...I love the presentation.
Thanks and hugs, Nancy.

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-11-23 06:15 AM

"Just curtain yourself in my corners
while I kiss you beneath intricately woven word canvases."

Beautiful phrasing within this lovely verse Jenn ... a treasure hunt no one could refuse! Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-11-23 07:29 AM

I love this piece, kind of how I felt when I was away last week. Speaks so beautifully of missing someone you love. What a lovely treasure hunt. It's charming and wonderfully written as always

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-11-28 11:57 AM

Jenn-
   Oh...I REALLY like this a bunch!
   I'd pick a favorite part, but it would
   end up being the whole thing..LOL.
   This is just so soft and tender...just lovely.
   Wonderfully written.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2001-11-28 03:46 PM

Jen,

this is pretty! ding ding you are the lucky winner of my 800th post! : )

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