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Open Poetry #17

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-11-20 02:59 PM

Far around the last pure sunset
laughters majesty disapears
the false oasis of another morning
cannot control how you want to feel
Original sin is a science
that you garner to your breast
lapping up societies horrors
to tangle your web of fear.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-11-20 06:15 PM

interesting... I think I understand this...but regardless of whether I understand or get it..I enjoyed it for the sounds and the fact it made me think...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-11-20 09:13 PM

mmmmmm Shoot this is so hard to respond to. It is so interesting...but I am torn about how to respond from my heart. Society can be right in many ways but sometimes I think too many things are just black and white do not have understanding of the grays that need compassion and love.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-20 09:39 PM

I feel a sense of great loss here, the loss of innocence and love, compounded by the constant entanglement of outside pressures.
an interesting write, one to ponder.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2001-11-21 02:44 PM

Your writing always leaves me thinking. ( and I don't think for nobody! lol)

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2001-11-22 10:48 AM

Ummmmmmmm....wow!

Jenn E

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-11-22 01:20 PM

Very deep write, Michael. I am intrigued.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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