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Just Passing Through....Time
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Just Passing Through....Time |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Just passing through....time Lord, with her on my mind It has been so many tears ago By a river of years that flowed so slow A love burns for her eternal As a flame without a candle This heart breaks when someone drops her name Into so many pieces it will never be the same What happened to vows that filled us with wonder Betrayed by a best man who put them asunder Sentenced now to wander through this life Never settling down, not knowing how without a wife |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 well this just really got to me!Kathleen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Robert, I was drawn to this line: "this heart breaks when someone drops her name....Into so many pieces that it will never be the same..." I love that, and would like to use it in a song at some point, if I may? Let me know, ok? ...you are me, I am you, we are one... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertG~ I am so moved by this piece~ REALLY ...... you should turn it into a song~ Lovely, lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Robert, Tich, tich, very rich. Enjoyed and have a happy. |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Thanking you all for your comments, and Sunny0ne, please let me know more details of your song idea, you can email me, and Happy Thanksgiving to all of my friends at Passions! Robert |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerfully written, Robert. I do so hope this is not your reality. Very sad.  All writing comes |
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