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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Releaved  The other day I needed this, a romp and playful time. A chance to let the stressing out, off here, instead of rhyme. I often hold onto the best, the friends on here, my gold. But the other day, some good news came to make my tight unfold. I'm serious, too much they say though some don't know the real. If you can catch me in the right, the moments are of zeal. And so this day I piled them high waiting for that call, to end the year of falling times, releasing smiles to all. It isn't easy when you lose control of what you had and memories resurface, as I try to plane the sad. I start this week, when Thursday comes to work with child in need, fulfilling both a want inside, for he and I, a seed.. A chance to sow my life again and his to spring ahead. Control for both is round the bend, as negatives are shed. So I am sharing news of this, and why I won't be seen, as obvious as once before in day/night, in between. But I will surface bit by bit, from bottom as I rise, and take the road ahead of me to rainbow view life's prize.  Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ First of all the photo is GORGEOUS .... What fun, gal~ Then the 'news' ... one can fairly 'see' the joy in your words~ And then the pure joy of the poem~ WONDERFUL~ *Big hugs* sweet friend ... Wonderful to see the happy in you~  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder...don't you ever sleep Marge?..I went to bed too early last night, woke up at 2 and figured I better get this written before I'm too busy...or too tired. This flu withdrawal has worn me out! and I'm ~smiling because I am glad you were the first to respond..it's not the greatest picture but I was not given the chance to pose. ((hugssss)) and thank you Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Maureen, I am so so proud of you! (smiles) You are not alone, for all my family always says I take things too seriously all the time, and I can't help that because I've been abused in the past, and now I too always wake up to each day to try and find some pure joy among the world. (smiles) I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I looovvveeeee the picture! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, This is one of your best. A lovely read and I enjoyed. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Poem and Pictures are very nice, sometimes the unplanned things are better. Gloom |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
There are many different roads to happiness and I am glad that you have found yours...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thy willow blossoms in another light, for within a childs smile burns so bright. Your strengths will be sorely missed ... for your words, hearts and souls have kissed and now your life seeks its right. The best of luck to you Maureen. Time will always be here waiting for your return, ... one question though, any apple pie left??   be happy dear friend |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Isn't it wonderful when we can let ourselves just be so free. I love the whole feel this poem gave me. Magnificent. Gosh you will be missed but you will be doing something you love so much. I can feel the happiness in you. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah..once again you lighten my load with words, thank you * Sy, although not one of my best. I would say finally a positive has come my way...and I thank you for always being supportive, this was a long time coming. Professor Gloom... Poem and Pictures are very nice,I don't think anything in the last two years has been planned, but this was a welcome, unplanned and perfect timing. thank you Mr. Gloom *s JamesM...oh this isn't my road to happiness...it is just the gate that let's me walk through the side of staidness...allowing me a chance to finally move forward. ctowen you always remember parts of my other poems, and bring a smile to me when you do ..I won't be gone just not around for the working hours and I will probably have nicer poems to write...losing the self-pity ones..focusing on other subjects. I am licking the fork as I type one handed...the last slice now tormenting my taste buds. But I can always make another. I am happy..as long as I can have something to offer the world. This last year and a half has eaten away at me. And anyway, happiness is relative..it doesn't take much to make me happy....and smile  as my jump into a pile of leaves shows...thank you again.~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Please to not forget ... "You have a lot to offer the world you have shown it through and through. Perhaps hidden to painful folds unfurled but ever present to these eyes of blue." I, for one, will always be watching for you under the moon.  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Well God bless you for finding such joy in helping others. This touches my grouchy soul. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
First, I was going to comment on what I heard in the delightful play of words, but then I read, more and more, of truly what good is in store but as a poet, may I request that you take your new life and its best so pack a bit of memo pad a pen will do the trick and bring back all that's had in the hearts made right and quick and bring to us these new delights as you pen away your nights... Congratulations! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hooray, hooray, Maureen's smiling and has me laughing with her title The world is aright and the Crescent City rejoices as her resident poetess beams. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wynter- How wonderful! Your happiness just jumps off the page for all to enjoy. Thanks for sharing your joy with us. My heart is smiling for you, my friend.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ctowen..your poetic response was beautiful..and watching me..I would bore you to death... RSWells..I don't believe you have a grouchy soul...not the way you write *s Lady In White ..I will try my best, but these children have not led happy lives...hopefully I will be able to help them learn to adjust and bring them some joy while doing my job. I am not sure there will be much to pen about a 5 and 7 year old's struggles...although I may be in for quite a surprise...*s Interloper...as always I thank you for your support...you do have a way to make me smile. Thank you again, I. hugssss ~Vicky I think you and Marge must drink the same water..always bubbly the both of you. Thank you ((hugss)) ~Wynter (I really don't start full time until the middle of this week..the holidays have interfered a bit with the hours of training needed...so I have been trying to play catch up on my poem responses...I thank all of my friends, again.) "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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