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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Parting As darkness shadows, I fall into dreams, into the recesses of warmth that your arms hold for me. I try to remember the last of your looks, how your eyes grasp the meaning of my expressions upon leaving you. It's the fear, perhaps of being the last time that your blues may penetrate and as I sigh to leave, I am already missing you even before... ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is splendidly expressed... Parting is a sorrowful event... but knowing about the inevitable nature of parting and knowing this ,perhaps of being the last time that your blues may penetrate is very moving... Well written... In admiration, Regards, Sudhir |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Eyes, Cold eyes Cold blue eyes Watching Watching you Blue watching you Leaving you Blue leaving you Blue eyes leaving you Till next time Till time Till Gloom |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Such sweet sorrow and fear fills these words! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend! (big huggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'I try to remember the last of your looks, how your eyes grasp the meaning of my expressions upon leaving you.' 'as I sigh to leave, I am already missing you' Oh, how this touches me so tenderly ~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
I agree. Well done. May I put this in my library, filed under "sad" ? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
An absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking poem. I could feel the pain of parting very well. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
My vision was that of the blue skies of day being overcome by the shadows of the night ... and I share the fear of not knowing it maybe the last. Well done, it flows with the deepness that is always within you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Sudhir ..sorrowful only for the moment until parted and the dreams hold til next time *s PG...Trying Heart Warm heart Warm lonely heart Lonely Lonely feeling Warm lonely feeling Lonely leaving you Leaving you 'Til next time 'Til time 'Til Noah...thank you for your kind words Thank you Marge~ hugsssss Apachecat906..yes you may put into your library but I am not so sure it is sad...as much as it is in the missing of someone when time together must end for the moment. Startime...pain? No *s ...more a longing not to part the real and have to dream. ctowen ..in a way you are correct, thank you. *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh that feeling of missing them.......before they are even gone. I understand this all well Wynter~ WEll written On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wynter- This is so tenderly penned...reached in and touched my heart. Just lovely, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Donna, you understand me more than you will ever know...I hope all is well and the holidays bring you and April joy. vandana ..thanks again *s enjoy ~Vicky..thank you..sometimes I touch myself with my words, when I read them later. (I never remember what I write for days after..sometimes wondering who it was that wrote these) I have a low threshhold for being sensitive...the tears are constant this year...I wonder if they will ever run out. huggssss ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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