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Woven On The Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Woven On The Wind Marge Tindal*~  The wind has circled around the moon out across the starlit loom of ebony sky in streaking threads weaving thoughts within my head Something is woven on the wind tonight I feel the cashmere sigh Twi-of-light in mid-of-night cradles the comet in iced lullaby Crystallized in caramel eyes I feel the ancient threading begin Mariah tugs the heartstrings 'cross echoing plains in weave of wind Strands drawn through ancient hands drifts in snowflake back to me Yes, something is woven on the wind this eve glistening upon the lawn at dawn in crowning glory of white majesty *My immense gratitude to Trillium for the inspiring title* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh, you've painted such a pretty picture here Marge. A light dusting of crystals woven across the wind .... winter is on it's way! Much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Marge woven with a heart that shines beautifully expressed Hope |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Something is woven on the wind tonight I feel the cashmere sigh Twi-of-light in mid-of-night cradles the comet in iced lullaby Crystallized in caramel eyes I feel the ancient threading begin Mariah tugs the heartstrings 'cross echoing plains in weave of wind ======================================== You are soooo coool... this is SOO lovely Margie... the imagery is delightful as is your poetic turn of phrase...which is your signature gift. "cashmere sighs and carmel eyes" ... "Twi-of-light in mid-of-night" yeppers...thats classic Margie  Those endless muses of yours never cease to amaze me.  meI can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Incredibly beautiful! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhhhh Marge how beautiful woven......thank you for sharing your always enchanting words. Glad that I didn't missed this one. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You paint from a full palette. This is lovely *L* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely stunning.....I was left in awe of the vision your poem evoked. Magnificent Marge. Can I ask where you got the picture from that matches your words so perfectly? It is magically beautiful. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge..sweet sister of my heart...this poem is awesome!! Gorgeous!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, this is gorgeous imagery....I love this |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is an incredibly lovely presentation, Marge... one I savored for quite some time in email this morning... thanks for such a great start to the day!!! *S* Your words paint a picture so detailed that I can enjoy the coming of winter even though it's hot outside... still! *S* Beautiful! |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Beautiful! I love your wording! Truly poetic, and I could FEEL that wind on my skin! Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can play on words any day... or night! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BEAUTIFUL...MARGE THE WARM SUMMER BREEZES LIGHT AND FEATHERY AS THIS POEM HUGS |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ A sigh and a smile is my response to this....just ~breath-taking~. Hugs, ~Kista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
See what I have to put up with around here? How did you get a picture of my girlfriend? No one else can write of my realm as beautifully as you Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Breathtaking, thank you so much for sharing this. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done and the graphic and title tie it into a lovely poetic package. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you, sweet lady~ Hope~ Thank you dear~ JanetMarie~ I can count on you to find those phrases that fall easiest from my pen~ AccordianMaid~ I appreciate your sweet reply~ Charisma~ I so enjoy sharing with you~ Seymour~ I adore that thought~ Thank you, love~ StarTime~ I thank you so much. Friends send me graphic gifts, such as this, to see what inspiration they stir~ Then a special friend sent me the title of the book she was reading ... and poof ! An imaginative muse began weaving the two together~ Thank you so much for your kindness~ Martie~ Thank you, sweetie~ SEA~ Awwwww, thanks, hon~ SuthernGal~ I just LOVE sharing with you~ JanMew~ Thank you very much~ Karilea~ You make me *smile* ... and I thank you~ SoaringEagle~ *Hugs* to you, my sweetest ~Warrior~  SmittenKitten~ I so appreciate your response. Thank you~ LunaTic~ You're such a sweetheart~ Thank you VERY much~ EagleOne~ I smile knowing you enjoyed it, my sweet friend~ Mysteria~ Thank you very much~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, thanks for this beauty. Such a lovely picture you have woven for us all. I loved it. Dee |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: i feel it, too...... yes, something is ... and you've woven the words so beautifully...... your phrasing, a fabric of heart...... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Something is woven on the wind tonight I feel the cashmere sigh Twi-of-light in mid-of-night cradles the comet in iced lullaby I am in awe...... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah Marge, beauty never ceases to flow from your pen and you never cease to enchant...may the dream always live... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! THE BEAUTIFUL PICTURE REMINDS ME OF ONE OF MY POEMS, AND YOUR WORDS ARE SUCH ENCHANTMENT!!! (smiles) BEAUTIFUL!!! Your sweet words are always crowning glory! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Thanks, hon. I am so glad you enjoyed it~ Doreen~ Thank you very much~ AWhispersCaress~ I am really pleased to know you like it~ JWesley~ You're just wonderful ... thank you~ Noah~ Let's keep that 'clapping' down to a low roar, okay ? Thanks ever so much~ *Hugs* from my heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I missed this one somehow. This is very good. Peaceful like. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh, Marge, this is so beautiful! I love the first snowflakes of winter. They've already fallen here (but they melted right away). Well done! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay okay okay.......to quote a very special "butterfly"......"YOU WEAVE IT SO WELL MY FRIEND!!!!!!!" Seriously my dear one ... you pen and your many muses offer such fascinating gifts to us on a daily basis and if only we take the time to listen then we are much wiser and much more inspired from our visits with you. Beautiful words my friend. ge gv yuhi!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! Very lovely! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MirrorMan~ Thank you so much~ Elizabeth~ Thanks ... I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend~ MeMaga~ *Big* Hugs my dear sweet friend~ I miss you just slightly bunches and bunches~ Denise~ Thanks, doll~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Yes I am going through my e-mails and have found such treasures, you have woven a real treasure in this one as well, your poetry is just beautiful, Marge you simply amaze me and thank you so much for not forgetting me, I need that. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Your "cashmere sigh" has drawn me back, wonderful write Marge, very much enjoyed. Thank you and regards, Olias. [This message has been edited by OLIAS (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ My sweet friend ... please know you are in my thoughts~ Thank you for allowing me to share my words with you~ OLIAS~ Oh ... I thank you so much. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I'm  -ing this one, just cause I can~*sigh* I see so many friends on these archived piece ... I think of you all ... and just plain downright miss you all~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This does seem like such ages ago! It's as beautiful now as it was then, however. I'm glad you bumped it and let me know! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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