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Woven On The Wind

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Marge Tindal
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Woven On The Wind

Marge Tindal*~

The wind has circled around the moon
out across the starlit loom
of ebony sky in streaking threads
weaving thoughts within my head

Something is woven on the wind tonight
I feel the cashmere sigh
Twi-of-light in mid-of-night
cradles the comet in iced lullaby

Crystallized in caramel eyes
I feel the ancient threading begin
Mariah tugs the heartstrings
'cross echoing plains in weave of wind

Strands drawn through ancient hands
drifts in snowflake back to me
Yes, something is woven on the wind this eve
glistening upon the lawn at dawn
in crowning glory of white majesty



*My immense gratitude to Trillium for the inspiring title*


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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Ahhh, you've painted such a pretty picture here Marge. A light dusting of crystals woven across the wind .... winter is on it's way! Much enjoyed.  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Marge woven with a heart that shines
beautifully expressed
Hope
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Something is woven on the wind tonight
I feel the cashmere sigh
Twi-of-light in mid-of-night
cradles the comet in iced lullaby

Crystallized in caramel eyes
I feel the ancient threading begin
Mariah tugs the heartstrings
'cross echoing plains in weave of wind
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You are soooo coool...
this is SOO lovely Margie...
the imagery is delightful as is your poetic turn of phrase...which is your signature gift.

"cashmere sighs and carmel eyes" ...
"Twi-of-light in mid-of-night"

yeppers...thats classic Margie  

Those endless muses of yours never cease to amaze me.
me

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

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Incredibly beautiful!
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ohhhhhhh Marge how beautiful woven......thank you for sharing your always enchanting words. Glad that I didn't missed this one.  

((hugs))
Charisma
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Marge,
You paint from a full palette. This is lovely
*L*
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Absolutely stunning.....I was left in awe of the vision your poem evoked. Magnificent Marge. Can I ask where you got the picture from that matches your words so perfectly? It is magically beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Marge..sweet sister of my heart...this poem is awesome!!  Gorgeous!!
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Marge, this is gorgeous imagery....I love this  
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This is an incredibly lovely presentation, Marge... one I savored for quite some time in email this morning... thanks for such a great start to the day!!! *S*

Your words paint a picture so detailed that I can enjoy the coming of winter even though it's hot outside... still! *S* Beautiful!
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Beautiful! I love your wording! Truly poetic, and I could FEEL that wind on my skin!

Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

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You can play on words any day...
or night!
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BEAUTIFUL...MARGE
THE WARM SUMMER BREEZES
LIGHT AND FEATHERY
AS THIS POEM
  HUGS
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Marge~ A sigh and a smile is my response to this....just ~breath-taking~.

Hugs,
~Kista


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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See what I have to put up with around here?

How did you get a picture of my girlfriend?

No one else can write of my realm as beautifully as you  

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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Breathtaking, thank you so much for sharing this.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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Beautifully done and the graphic and title tie it into a lovely poetic package.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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Kit~
Thank you, sweet lady~

Hope~
Thank you dear~

JanetMarie~
I can count on you to find those phrases
that fall easiest from my pen~

AccordianMaid~
I appreciate your sweet reply~

Charisma~
I so enjoy sharing with you~

Seymour~
I adore that thought~  Thank you, love~

StarTime~
I thank you so much.
Friends send me graphic gifts, such as this,
to see what inspiration they stir~
Then a special friend sent me the title of the book she was reading ... and poof !
An imaginative muse began weaving the two together~
Thank you so much for your kindness~

Martie~
Thank you, sweetie~

SEA~
Awwwww, thanks, hon~

SuthernGal~
I just LOVE sharing with you~

JanMew~
Thank you very much~

Karilea~
You make me *smile* ... and I thank you~

SoaringEagle~
*Hugs* to you, my sweetest ~Warrior~

SmittenKitten~
I so appreciate your response.  Thank you~

LunaTic~
You're such a sweetheart~
Thank you VERY much~

EagleOne~
I smile knowing you enjoyed it, my sweet friend~

Mysteria~
Thank you very much~

*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-02-2001).]

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Marge, thanks for this beauty. Such a lovely picture you have woven for us all. I loved it.

Dee
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quote:
Yes, something is woven on the wind this eve
glistening upon the lawn at dawn
in crowning glory of white majesty


i feel it, too...... yes, something is ...
and you've woven the words so beautifully...... your phrasing, a fabric of heart......
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Something is woven on the wind tonight
I feel the cashmere sigh
Twi-of-light in mid-of-night
cradles the comet in iced lullaby


I am in awe......

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

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Ah Marge, beauty never ceases to flow from your pen and you never cease to enchant...may the dream always live...

jwesley
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CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! THE BEAUTIFUL PICTURE REMINDS ME OF ONE OF MY POEMS, AND YOUR WORDS ARE SUCH ENCHANTMENT!!! (smiles) BEAUTIFUL!!! Your sweet words are always crowning glory! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Dee~
Thanks, hon.  I am so glad you enjoyed it~

Doreen~
Thank you very much~

AWhispersCaress~
I am really pleased to know you like it~

JWesley~
You're just wonderful ... thank you~

Noah~
Let's keep that 'clapping' down to a low roar, okay ?
Thanks ever so much~

*Hugs* from my heart~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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