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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-10-14 07:50 AM



Kisses In Your Mind

It's early morn, the phone it rings
Awakens me, gives start
Was dreaming, I, a pleasant one
No shadows in the dark.

Had arms around me, warm and strong
With breath an inch away
When exhaled, tickled me a bit
Preferred awhile to stay.

It rang again, I let it go
Too early still, was time
Instead I rested, filled with thoughts
Had kisses in my mind.

Remembered when you planted them
Not kisses, but the thoughts
How often times you teased me so
Eyes roaming body, soft.

Until you saw me, on the edge
Then lips to skin, would find
You planted all the kiss of want
As kiss thoughts in my mind.

Whenever you're away from me
And dreams take me on high
The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine
Replays in my mind's eye.

Hoping that the same is true
When times are tough or sad
That kisses float from me to you
When I am feeling "bad".

So when your eyes upon this read
No matter who,  you'll find
Someone out there loving you
Sends kisses in your mind.


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-10-15 05:23 AM


Do kiss thoughts qualify as real kisses?  James
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-10-15 05:38 AM


they are the next  best thing *s

you are  cute

((hugs)) and thanks for removing the 0, JamesM

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-10-15 08:40 AM


very soft and filled with longing.... such thought kisses can be missed as much or more than the physical...

I do believe our minds are the place that needs to be touched fist and foremost if there is to be love...


nicely done


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-10-15 08:55 AM


Wynter,
The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine
An excellent line, good write. Sy

Startime
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5 posted 2001-10-15 10:04 AM


*sigh* soft and tender. Makes me want to go back to sleep and dream about kisses. Maybe someday I will have someone to dream about. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-10-15 10:10 AM


I like this. I use to have these kind of dreams. Once in awhile, I still do.
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-10-16 10:08 AM


Cpat...I agree, it's the mind that controls everything else *s

Sy...I love those lips on lips...thank You ~softsmile~

Startime...such sweet thoughts, thank you..I hope that comes true for you, for sometimes all we have are the dreams to sustain us.
  
SmartChick... then I wish for you to have them every night...thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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