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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-13 03:07 PM

Surrender To Desire

Nervously moving towards fate,
clandestine moonlit night
My reverie I will relate
beneath distant starlight

Such dreams and thoughts to be disclosed,
all open to your view
Trespass upon my soul, exposed,
your touch I will pursue

Green grass cradles my body, bare,
caressed by gentle breeze
Pleasure given beyond compare,
wild needs we would appease

Filling heavens, a blazing flame,
two souls consumed by fire
True passion joined as they proclaim,
surrender to desire

Your eyes, this night, now reflect,
beneath the starlit sky
Eternal love mirrors respect,
feelings we can’t deny

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-10-13 03:27 PM

(sigh) Such a beautiful expression of desire written so soft and tender! (big hugggssssss) Oh Karen, it's so great to hear from you again, I've missed you! God Bless You this day!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2001-10-13 04:59 PM

startime....

this was beautiful!
i loved the imagery in this...felt
like I was right there. Just a very
beautiful write!!

Take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-10-13 05:13 PM

Karen, where have you been!? It's so good to read you again...welcome home!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-13 05:18 PM

Thank you, very much, Noah. I appreciate your comments. Good to see you too.

Amy....I am so glad you liked it. I so love writing on this topic. You take care too, dear one.

Sunshine.....you bring tears to my eyes. It is wonderful to be remembered. It feels so good to drown myself in the talented words that pour from the pens of the Passions writers. Hugs, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-10-13 05:40 PM

Karen,
A lovely poem I enjoyed the read.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-10-13 06:13 PM

Welcome back to the blue pages, Karen

This was so sensual and beautiful, you KNOW I love it!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

7 posted 2001-10-13 06:43 PM

Wonderfully romantic!

Loved the images.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-13 06:49 PM

Lovely and romantic Karen. Enjoyed! ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-10-13 07:00 PM

Hi Karen!!

wonderful to see you again. . . this is just excellent. . . you know how I love Romance. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-10-13 07:46 PM

simply marvelous.....so enchanting and easy
to read much into those passion filled words
expressed so well....thank you for sharing
this with me....

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2001-10-13 08:56 PM

Ah, Karen, how I have missed you and your wonderful style! Thank you for this...and for joining us again

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2001-10-13 10:24 PM

Seymour....thank you so much for your comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Melissa....*grin* oh yes...I knew you would like it. I am so happy to be back.

sunshinemist....I am one who love to give a vision with my writing. I am glad you saw the image of this one. Thank you so much.

NancyLee....don't we all love romance? I am glad you could feel it in this poem. Thank you, so much.

Sven........hi there sweet man....it is so good to be back. Hugs to you, dear man, and a kiss too, if I may.

Magnus.....considering the way you write romance you have given me a great compliment. Thank you so very much.

Ah sweet Balladeer how I have missed your sensually romantic nature. Your words warm more than just my heart, dear man.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-10-13 11:17 PM

A beautifully passionate write. Lovely images conjured up here

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

14 posted 2001-10-13 11:26 PM

This is quite lovely!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

15 posted 2001-10-15 03:48 PM

This is sooo romantic, lovely...wonderful...it sounds like a fairytale of desire.
Loved it!

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