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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-10-13 12:41 PM



You've been speaking
to demons

again

flipping coins in
corners & trading stories

I've never had a chance
or a defense for you
have fellowshipped
with haters
who onced loved me
yet never did

so I leave you to broil gossip
to speak soothingly
to embittered dissenters
& have your ears tickled
in return

as you wish

as you wish...

~R.T.
10/01


© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-10-13 12:44 PM


wow........then WOW! this leaves me speechless.......
Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-13 12:44 PM


this one stung Tier. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-10-13 12:46 PM


There is power in this...but even Solomon spoke to demons...the question is, who does the bidding for whom? Very thoughtful work on this. I like.  
Duncan
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4 posted 2001-10-13 12:52 PM


Your poems are consistently among my favorites.  The style, the flow...and here, the resignation.  
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
5 posted 2001-10-13 02:29 AM


Thank you, SEA, your comment has me smiling ear to ear...

Sven, A poem that I'd read here at passions inspired this work... Thank you for reading...

Serenity, You ask a very good question.  One that I will ponder. Thank you for reading and commenting... *smiles*

Duncan, the feeling is mutual. I love reading your work as well...

Thank you all for the encouragement!


*smiles*

~Tier

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