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Snowflake Whispers
By: Noah Eaton
10/12/01

Cotton pixies parachute from heaven's clouds
Quietly humming serene invocations through the night
Daylight fading out over barley oceans
Kaleidoscope sunset skies like a gristmill, scattering colors bright

Nature's celestial melody throws off all disguise
Impeaching angels hidden from behind heavens doors
Lifting sleek veils from glass faces
Sharing their beads, vaulting on porcelain slippers to the floor

Snow Owl spreads her wings, crowing in luxury
Feeling an angel land on her nose, merry as a cricket
Rising her wings, rollicking to His looming blessing
Light to the breast, embracing the gossamer moon's spirit

Snowflake whispers blanket these fields of dreams
Snow Owl pensively breathes the morning aria
Warbling in the touch of an angels fingers
Chanting her family's hymn during His winter bravada...



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1 posted 2001-10-12 11:29 PM


this is stunning.......
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2 posted 2001-10-12 11:31 PM


Noah

Gosh, I love the way you write...the imagery is wonderful    You really should get your poetry published!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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