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WhiteKnight
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0 posted 2001-10-12 08:49 PM



The "Half Baked" poem
by WhiteKnight

a poem
how does it start
it flows
from the heart

In the kitchen of my mind
I mix
verse and rhyme

I add my emotions
to spice it up
just about
one cup

happiness, sadness
Love or pain
should they be strained?

Everything in it's place
words pour forth
and flow in place
bake it now
don't burn your hand
boy, it smells grand

cook it now
and serve to friends!





I hope eveyone likes my "cooking" ;-)


© Copyright 2001 Corey Rugar - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2001-10-12 09:09 PM


Very cool images, WK...clever little poem...I like it!

sp  

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you can change the weather...

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2 posted 2001-10-12 09:19 PM


Yummy !!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2001-10-12 10:12 PM


I enjoy your cooking, WhiteKnight. I have the same recipe, I think!  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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4 posted 2001-10-12 11:11 PM


this is delightful!!   I enjoyed very much  
Enchantress
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5 posted 2001-10-12 11:19 PM


You can cook for me anytime!  Enjoyed!  ~Nancy~  

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-10-12 11:41 PM



How very clever of you!  Well this poet loves your cooking  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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