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Sunshine (under 20, My first Shot at it.. ) |
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StarLiteRose Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 20Rose from the Sky |
Today the sun shines bright up in the sky showering the world with light. ___________ It rather stinks, I think LOL... I probably didnt even do it right.. but I tried. "The Stars shine bright and down upon me, the Rose of the Sky" -Me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Works for me! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ah, Grasshopper: the journey of "TWENTY OR LESS..." begins with the very first word. There is no right to these -- simply, express, have fun, be creative, and keep it at 20 or less words. Run with it!  -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes! It works!! It's good...I like it. ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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StarLiteRose Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 20Rose from the Sky |
Thank you all very much!!  Im glad yall liked it.. and thanks for the explanation Mark! I do appreciate it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You can never grow until you branch out and try. I believe you have done well. |
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