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Your Fool............ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Your eyes capture me Pull my soul into your domain I haven’t the power to fight No will to refrain Your mouth consumes me Devours my pride Leaves my heart open This love I cannot hide Your voice surrounds me Possesses the very essence of who I am I am lost to you completely And just don’t give a damn Your touch invades me My body ~ you rule (Plunder me, take me) I am but your fool ~SEA~ "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey Sea, this is good. I like it. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your mouth consumes me Devours my pride Leaves my heart open This love I cannot hide If a fool you must be, at least it is for love. I have felt this way, too. Great write! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Where's that "hot" sign when we need it! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Fan...who has got the fan?  LOL! Loved it, Susan. Very HOT! (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, When you give, you give. Enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sea, I have felt this powerlessness before - awesome job !! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, you said it, and just the way it is.. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Sea...the love bug has got you girl!! Mighty hot this one....enjoyed!  ~Nancy Lee~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your touch invades me My body ~ you rule (Plunder me, take me) I am but your fool I could have written all but that last verse...I am not that bold...but you made me smile ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I fear I see you as no ones fool.... but someones intense lover... a lucky someone... very nicely done SEA... as I told you before you have to quit with these or I am going to fall for you yet.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Whew, girl! You gotta warns us men before you post this stuff! Very sweet. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
POWERFUL.....LOVE with a capital L.O.V.E. enjoyed this read....loved the ending. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea, how I love the way you write...... Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
With this definition I suppose I have been many womens fool...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
SEA How easily I can relate to this great piece of writing. It's obvious you are such a hopeless romantic like myself. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
ah, a woman in need is NEVER the fool ! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ Sometimes we all play the fool, I know I have....many times, but some of what I have learned is most times it is so worth it....this is lovely, and penned perfectly... Lauren I keep my ideals, |
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