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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-10-10 09:05 PM



I don't want to face
this night alone
Circles of fears
surround me
Insecurity
nestle me in its blanket
I cannot find myself
in this confusion
I hear a distinct
laughter in the distance
could that be me one day?
Or is it my destiny
to dwell
small in this world


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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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1 posted 2001-10-10 09:37 PM


Insecurity
nestle me in its blanket

There is a warmth in familiarity, even when there shouldn't be.  I'm sure you'll laugh, again...loudly and with love.

Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-10 09:54 PM


destiny is yours. . . take it. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-10-10 10:05 PM


Oh how I love to ponder like this Walker ... very nicely written, much enjoyed this thought-provoking piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-10-10 10:41 PM


Touchingly written. I hope you will look destiny in the face and walk tall and proud.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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