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Open Poetry #16

Words Like Steel

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-10-10 12:53 PM

Words like steel,
Honed to a fine cutting edge,
What’s saying
Souls flaying,
Events of the past you dredge,
And you try
To make cry
With stolen dreams you once knew,
Words so cold,
Words so bold,
Splitting my spirit in two,
Words like steel,
Uncaring how they make feel.

Gloom

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-10 03:23 PM

This was truly an incredible write. I guess perhaps you have to have known this one, to truly feel the magnitude of your words. Well done indeed.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-10 03:42 PM

I agree with Mysteria, you need to have been there to realize the magnitude of the words you have written. Well written Gloom.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-10-2001).]

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