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paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-10-04 05:44 PM

He was buying a dozen donuts
and a quart of milk
Wearing sunglasses and
a shirt made of silk
I spoke up and asked him
if he was the king
He just smiled sadly and
mumbled no I don't sing
He turned and ambled
out through the door
I thought my jaw would
bounce off the floor
His pink caddie shown
bright in the sun
On the vanity plate were
the words "HOUND DOG 1"

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (edited 10-04-2001).]

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-10-04 05:53 PM

Very cute..which way was he headed?

flwolf
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 3
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-10-04 05:59 PM

Nice! You may want to make the word "guart" a "quart" of milk on the second line. Other than that, I love it!

Have a great day!

FL-Wolf

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-04 06:38 PM

I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!
Sir Robert, bring on more of the 50's theme!
Enjoyed...enjoyed...enjoyed.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-10-04 09:00 PM

I love this!!!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-10-04 09:05 PM

Oh I love this. I wish I had seen him too

Sandra

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-10-04 09:06 PM

this is the way I envision an Elvis spotting o yuh nicely done

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-10-04 09:38 PM

This is so cute. So, Elvis is alive and well and living in Florida huh?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-10-04 10:30 PM

paladin,
Cute poem...livened my day

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

9 posted 2001-10-04 11:25 PM

Ohh my, I love this...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-10-05 09:16 AM

Paladin~
Cute .... real cute~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

11 posted 2001-10-05 09:37 AM

For all the nice words.

Thank yuh!,Thank yuh very much!

Elvis lives in our hearts.

paladin

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LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

12 posted 2001-10-05 10:44 AM

Paladin - I thought it might have been me you saw, but my license plate says, "CAT KICKER 1" - so it couldn't have been me - lol.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2001-10-05 10:48 AM

loved it...as i loved Elvis too...

enjoyed

~Victoria~

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