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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-01 10:21 AM

Didn't know where this one was going...but I have to say I'm happy with the outcome...but don't know what to call it as it's rather 'out there' for me.

Cat’s in the cradle
soup’s on the table
everyone’s here
but the moon.

Fly’s in the cupboard
Old Mother Hubbard
shedding a tear
in a spoon.

Roaming the hillside
it’s such a thrill, I’d
walk with a friend
hand in hand.

Eggs in the skillet
bread made with millet
sing me a tune
with the band.

Rockets are flying
agents are spying
apples are making
sweet sauce.

Flowers are dying
children are crying
thunder is shaking
the cross.

Moon will be spinning
blood red and grinning
dancing the sky
in the night.

Sun will be bright’ning
strike out the lightning
God will make
ev’rything right.

© October 1, 2001

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-10-01 10:25 AM

Amen.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-10-01 10:42 AM

Amen.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-10-01 02:37 PM

VAS~ Lovely! The rhyme and flow of this is very unique. It's like a chant...it almost pulsates.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

HM3
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 169
TX

4 posted 2001-10-01 05:18 PM

Congregations & Dissertations?

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-01 09:26 PM

This is so cute. I love it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-01 09:31 PM

Sun will be bright’ning
strike out the lightning
God will make
ev’rything right.

Amen

Nice to meet you Vas, peace and smiles

Marie

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-01 10:17 PM

What a fun bunch of 'nursing' rhymes to patch our wounded hearts.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

8 posted 2001-10-10 09:32 AM

can't think of a title, but i enjoyed it!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2001-10-10 10:10 AM

This is really good. Enjoyed reading it.

Jeen
Member

since 2000-06-07

Posts 91

10 posted 2001-10-10 10:14 AM

I liked it!!!

Amen.

Jeen

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