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Love Comes Calling
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Love Comes Calling |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Sometimes when you least expect, a knock comes to your door You try hard to ignore it, yes, you’ve heard that knock before But human nature as it is, just had to have a peek It’s Love, come calling, bringing all the answers that you seek... And love is not a stranger, she has visited at times She harbours certain dangers, certain pains within her rhymes To some of us, the chance to know her pleasures still entice And when she calls, she’ll never need knock twice! To open hearts and hopeful minds, she gives her gifts of joy Which turns an old heart into that of youthful girl or boy It’s all right there, within your reach, if only you can see Her gifts, without conditions, are all free... So, always keep a listen, for Love’s gentle magic knock It could be any time, because Love knows no tick of clock She could wear any face, for she’s a Mistress of disguise You’ll know her, when you gaze into her eyes... I know this, for not long ago, she knocked upon my door I opened wide, and let her in, she’d called on me before But this time she had brought a friend, with heart so pure and true So, never doubt her motives, when she comes to call on you! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 10-01-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'll take that advice and let the loving begin...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"So, always keep a listen, for Love’s gentle magic knock It could be any time, because Love knows no tick of clock" Bravo SunnyOne! Oh, this was marvelous in sentiment ... and superb in cadence and rhyme. Wonderful flow to this inspiring piece, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful and so true. Great read lady. alan |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Excellent poem!! Enjoyed very mucy. :-) Nice to meet you also. Warm smiles, ~Marie~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi there, where have you been hiding??? Liking this poem, I hope it bodes well for us all, that love is still knocking. Sandra |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
very, very nice. the words just seemed to melt into the screen |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
This was extraordinary. You gave Love life...gave your reader a new twist. Excellent job! Don't care what people say |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh this is just so lovely. I did so enjoy this piece If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable read, with a positive message. "So, always keep a listen, for Love’s gentle magic knock It could be any time, because Love knows no tick of clock" My door is still awaiting for that special knock. Thanks, Sunnyone! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is very lovely. Seems I'm never home when that knock comes to my door though. Great job! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
You go girl!!!! Send her to my house when you see her. If she needs directions, just let me know. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Amen to that! This is so awesome, it's one of your best! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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