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Open Poetry #16

The Touch

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-25 07:15 PM

The Touch

Suddenly tears stop
A butterfly hovers, persists
A smile returns from the touch
The gentleness, the softness
Enters the heart
Seeing a wandering butterfly
Its touch priceless

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-09-25 07:22 PM

A beautiful respite moment, penned so well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-25 08:01 PM

Beautiful indeed....love butterflies, I do!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-26 01:11 AM

JD~
Softly fluttered verse~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-10-01 11:18 PM

Daniel-
   Nicely penned, my poet friend.
   Enjoyed the thoughts.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-10-01 11:20 PM

Daniel...Beautiful....truly enjoyed it
alan

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-10-01 11:32 PM

Daniel, you always write the most beautiful poems...always a pleasure to read your work.
((hugs))

RP

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