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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-09-30 03:15 PM

~~~ To read Your Palm ~~~

Do you know
What I want to do?

Read your palm
As if I always knew
Knew these lines
And memorize them by heart
So I could tell it all
From the start

Trace my finger along
The line of life
In you.

Make you shiver
As I foretell all
That I should know so well

What do you want me to say?
That I want you to be here always?
That your road will come my way
That you will forever stay

In your palm, I shall read
The beginning
The end
The growing seed
Of love
Unfathomed
As the sea

I can already see you tremble
Anticipating my touch
As I closely read your palm
And force you to hush

So would you extend your palm
Let me read this line
That should foretell of us
In this web of time.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thank you

*I've written this some time ago and I don't know why felt like posting it today.

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-30 03:18 PM

I don't know why either my friend. . . but I'm glad that you did. . .

this is very passionate and loving. . . would that we could all read each other like this. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-09-30 03:21 PM

Glad that you decided to post this one, and share it with us.......

Beautiful piece!!!!!

Charisma

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-09-30 03:32 PM

This is wonderful, I love everything about it.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-09-30 03:43 PM

An elegant draping of thought in a consistent style which reveals a shimmering facet of its poet...

I wonder, if you read my palm, what would you see?

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-09-30 04:01 PM

~Sven~

Oh...yes. If only we could...

Thank you dearly
---------------------------

~Charisma~

And I'm certainly gald that you liked it....

Thank you

-------------------------

~Sandra~

And a heartfelt thank you for you for loving it....

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~Mark~

I wonder that too....

But is this some indirect acknowledgement that I'd better change to palmistry career?...lol

Thank you dear friend as ever for your wonderful kind words.

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bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

6 posted 2001-09-30 08:54 PM

THAT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL. I AM JUST AMASED AT ALL THE TALENT HERE.....

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-09-30 09:05 PM

Such an incredibly beautiful presentation!!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-10-01 07:01 AM

Lovely piece of writing. Wish I could read palms -it would save me a lot of trouble

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-10-01 07:16 AM

Very nicely written MyEnchanted_Melody ... much enjoyed the anticipation this piece captured.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-10-01 08:11 AM

MyEnchantedMelody~
Very delicately done~
Most enjoyable~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2001-10-01 09:59 AM

Beware a jagged line of heart--
for this one loves in fits and starts.
And should this line entwine with head--
you have a "Simian" line instead--
where mind meets heart
and heart's confused--
this one's temper leaves a bruise...
A healthy mound of Jupiter
has more luck than one deserves--
depressions in the plains of Mars?
An Artist who is easily scarred.
Should lines of three meet mound of moon--
A prophet singing madman's tune.
There are more words to sing this song,
But first? Let silver cross the palm!

You've inspired me!

Hope ya don't mind! LOVED your poem. Your palm reads like poetry!

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