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Open Poetry #16

Everything Is Me

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-09-28 09:08 AM

Everything Is Me

Not all is beautiful
As you can see
Take a look inside
Everything is me

Here there is good
Sometime misery
All gives a mixture
Everything is me

An emotional flow
Heart given free
To feel and touch
Everything is me

Try to understand
Whoever you see
View both sides
Everything is me

Fantasy or dream
Quite often I flee
To reality I return
Everything is me

Complete the tour
Comply to agree
A complex whole
Everything is me

Hope©2001

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 10:34 AM

"An emotional flow
Heart given free
To feel and touch
Everything is me"

oh I like this part best.....very well done!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2001-09-28 11:15 AM

hey thanks Sea , so pleased you enjoyed
Hope

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

3 posted 2001-09-30 10:55 PM

nice write! your poem flows quite smoothly and some very interesting points made. good job!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-09-30 11:19 PM

hey thanks cruz , pleased you followed the flow !!!
Hope

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