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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-09-26 06:48 AM


Harmony Transcends

Leaves sweet scented
Tranquil resting place
Having had this dream
In warming embrace

My beautiful dreamer
Whispering me there
Holding out his arms
Then stroking my hair

Upon  the grassy bank
Arms cradled tenderly
Love moving forward
In gently lowering me

The evergreen canopy
With jasmine overhang
In the springtime sun
He held me and sang

Sensuous and sweet
Honeysuckle boughs
Passionately knowing
Love intimate vows

Of words and touch
We shared a dream
Flowing of pleasures
Along by the stream

Aromas filling the air
Natures loving blends
Where dreamers meet
Harmony transcends

Hope©2001


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angelswing
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1 posted 2001-09-26 07:42 AM


Hello hopeful one, what a great poem, I thought it was very discriptive, and kinda romantic . Thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tom .

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2 posted 2001-09-26 08:34 AM


Hope~

It's all so lovely ... but this -

'The evergreen canopy
With jasmine overhang
In the springtime sun
He held me and sang'


-whispered gently to me~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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HopeS
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3 posted 2001-09-26 09:24 AM


Thanks Tom , yes I'm always living in "Hope and always the romantic LOL
by the way I am originally from England
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-09-26 09:25 AM


Hey thanks Marge my friend , so pleased you enjoyed
Hugs Hope

Zinsser
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5 posted 2001-09-26 09:32 AM


enjoyed this very much......
~Connie~

vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-10-01 11:56 PM



Hope-
  Such a soft and tender write.
  Much enjoyed.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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