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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-09-23 09:47 AM


Cast a flowers fair    
Upon the air to fly and
Catch a lovers sigh.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-09-23 11:01 AM


From the internal rhyme to the lightness of the mood you've captured, loved this Sy!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-09-23 11:13 AM


Kit,
Wonderful comment. *L*

Munda
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3 posted 2001-09-23 11:16 AM


Good one! Enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-09-23 11:21 AM


Thank you Munda.
Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-09-23 04:04 PM



Sir Sy - you know that I'm   from ear to ear...I love it!  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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6 posted 2001-09-23 04:42 PM



Sweet Seymour Tabin
You've gone and done it again
Spread a smile in wile~


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-09-23 08:17 PM


Melissa,
Thank you. *L*

Marge,
I love you too.

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2001-09-24 01:25 AM


awwww, this is so lovely  

Thank you.

Maree

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-09-24 08:58 AM


Thank you Dark angel for the lovely.
Sunshine
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10 posted 2001-09-24 10:53 AM



petals delight in
being cast about the words
fragrant in their Sy

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-09-24 10:01 PM


Sunshine,
This is a delight. *L*

vlraynes
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12 posted 2001-09-27 01:05 AM



Seymour-
  Beautiful, my friend.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SmittenKitten
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13 posted 2001-09-27 03:05 AM


This is lovely...
I'm going to go find some late bloomers and cast them out to do their magic  

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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