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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Autumnal Equinox ~*Marge Tindal*~ It is the autumn of the trees resplendently adorned Kaleidoscopic colors greet our eyes as equinox is borne One by one they tumble falling in soft surround resting in technicolor heaps as they land upon the ground Raking comes, as raking will but before that task begins Enjoy the pleasure of a child Go ahead - jump in ! *In the Northern Hemisphere September 22, begins the Autumnal Equinox ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is wonderful Marge! |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Splendid technicolor poem! *grins* It's about that time of year already is it? Good grief, it seems like just yesterday the snow decided to go away, and here it is fall already. Good grief, I repeat! I mentioned your use of colorage; it certainly adds the intended effect, which, I might add, is awesome! And your palabras create a different sort of image, but the same colors! *grins* Great write! You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful poem and superb presentation Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Thank you very much. MaskedIntruder~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it. LizzieLady~ I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This sure brings back happy memories, of my children helping rake leaves and then jumping in the pile. I wasn't above doing it myself! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhh Marge.....I LOVE IT...as it brings up some good ole memories  Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this was truly a work of art, words and graphics, I kept it!  Beautiful Marge.~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Here in east Texas we don't get much of a color change in our pine trees so thanks a lot for sharing the picture.....this dosn't mean I have to help rake does it? Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Me too ! What fun ! Thanks, gal~ Charisma~ Now that's what I want to hear ... LOVE stirring those memories~ Thanks, doll~ Mysteria~ Thanks, hon ... I had great fun painting it~ Dan~ Yeppers ! One rake size - fits all ! Thanks for volunteering ????? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This definitely makes me want to jump in. Great read Marge If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this one Marge! Can't wait now until the leaves start to change...all the beautiful color we get here in Canada...and I do jump in myself!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracey~ Such Autumn pleasure awaits us all~ Enchantress~ I think the kid in us never abandons that which gives us such pleasure~ *Hugs* and *Thanks* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- YES!! Jumping in right now!  Hey...this is fun! It's been WAY too long since I jumped into a pile of leaves! Thanks for the smile and the fun, my friend. It was much needed and is MUCH appreciated. I LOVE the poem...you know how much I love it when you break out the colored ink!  LOVE YOU LOTS~ Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
I don't get much Autumn color, being surrounded by concrete, but the picture you painted here more than makes up for it! Great work! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*Hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ For you ... anything !  And, yes ... I owed you some colored inking~ Love ya' Sinister~ Thank you so much. SmittenKitten~ A lovely painted reply~  Thanks bunches~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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