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0 posted 2001-09-23 02:03 AM


She sat up straight in her high chair
and flashed that saucy little smile,
and with spaghetti noodles
dangling from her toes and
garlic bread butter stuck on her nose,
she laughed at the 6 o'clock news,
and the questions adults asked about the world.
For her, the answer was already there
in the spilled building blocks
on the livingroom floor.
The building blocks that spelled out
the pre-schoolers golden rule,
LOVE and KINDNESS = PEACE and HAPPINESS
for all who play together.
And I smile at the building blocks,
and pray that I will see more of them
scattered 'round the world.



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1 posted 2001-09-23 02:06 AM


(she eats like my son did)  
this is very heart warming  
I love the way this feels so hopeful!!  

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2 posted 2001-09-23 02:48 AM


MidniteSun~
This is such a sweet render~
Delightfully told~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-09-23 02:55 AM


SEA: Aha, you have a gourmet eater at home. I can't let my teenager see this...it was a memory of her during the Gulf war that inspired this, 'though the words came to me only tonite. Thanks for reading.

Marge: Thanks, and I giggle when I think back on my sweet Sara's spaghetti episodes, and her matter-of-fact attitude about life, which hasn't changed. At age thirteen, she seems wiser to me than many three times her age.

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4 posted 2001-09-23 03:28 AM


Ahhh, you made me remember spaghetti dinners with my son, who is now a Father himself, and it made me smile, so thank you for this one, it was delightful.

~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~

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5 posted 2001-09-23 03:32 AM


Mysteria, you are very, very welcome. I hope this memory trip helps a little in healing the wounds of the past few days. Thanks for reading and sharing.
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6 posted 2001-09-23 06:46 AM


You've brought up many memories of food everywhere except on their plates, with this lovely poem.

Thank you

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7 posted 2001-09-23 01:30 PM


HeHe. Thanks, Titia. Funny memories are worth more gold than the IRS has ever seen.
Ah, spaghetti. I've seen it on the walls and the ceiling, but mostly in the hair. Glad you've "been there...done that"  it's proof of our 'universal' experiences.

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8 posted 2001-09-23 01:46 PM


spaghetti hair!!!  I love it. . . this is wonderful. . . I wonder what would happen if we all had blocks like this???

great job. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-09-23 03:31 PM


Thanks for reading about my spaghetti toes (and head) and the spilled blocks.
Now, about those building blocks....about how many will we be needing? We may have to start a new company... "Passion's Peaceful  Building Blocks"???

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10 posted 2001-10-02 02:39 AM


hi

the title caught my attention and this makes me feel good..this made me realise how free of prejudices and hatred children are and how I, though "wiser", need to look up to them...

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11 posted 2001-10-02 02:42 AM


Cuter than a cereal bowl on the head.  Oh for the time of innocence.  God bless our children and God bless His world.
Larry C

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12 posted 2001-10-02 03:00 AM


faterider: I am glad you enjoyed the spaghetti toes poem. Sure wish I could believe in innocence again.

Larry C: LOL. I remember the cereal bowl. It was oatmeal. And to think I used to buy oatmeal soap, when all that time it was in the cupboard, just waiting for those little hands. And I'm afraid that innocents are harder to find these days.  

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13 posted 2001-10-02 02:18 PM


Sounds like a winning commercial for Ragu.  You may have something with the building block idea.  Great write!
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14 posted 2001-10-02 02:22 PM



This is so charming in its disarming...

thank you!

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15 posted 2001-10-02 02:26 PM


Midnitesun, aren't kids the greatest!!?? Nice write!
~Marie~

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16 posted 2001-10-02 02:38 PM


This gives me the warm fuzzy feeling!!!  

Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

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17 posted 2001-10-02 02:50 PM


Duncan: Hehe. I too like Ragu. And let's go get some building blocks...it's time to rebuild our world.

Decaflame: Disarming? Yes, let's disarm the world.

Sunshinemist: Yep, they are great. (My neighbor has 8!)

Caolina: Thanks. Happy to be able to cover you with some fuzzies.

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18 posted 2001-10-02 04:59 PM


Midnite--you have brought back many precious memories for quite a few people, including me.  The innocence of a spaghetti world and the peace and love blocks.  You are right, we could all learn from our children.  Thank you for this!!
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19 posted 2001-10-02 05:10 PM


very very nice..I think this one could be  printed in a magazine for many to enjoy. *s

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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20 posted 2001-10-02 07:34 PM


Martie: Thanks. Glad I could bring back some precious memories.

nakdthoughts: Gosh, you think so? What a nice complement, the kind any writer likes to hear. I'm so glad you liked it.

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