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walker
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0 posted 2001-10-02 07:48 AM



Do I know more than I should?
When I read your poems
and can't give a prefabricated comment
I know who you love
Can I avoid getting involved?
Would I have an impact in your life?
Do you know more than you should?
When you read me do I reveal too much?
You know who I love
Do I drag you in my life?
Do you know more than you should?

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-02-2001).]

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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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1 posted 2001-10-02 01:22 PM


I don't know if this is a real situation for you or if you, as I, feel as if you sometimes 'know' poets by their poetry.  Either way, it's an interesting write.
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2 posted 2001-10-02 02:47 PM


Sometimes yes and sometimes no.  I guess you learn by making mistakes.  It's called the "School of Hard Knocks."    
Larry C
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3 posted 2001-10-02 03:25 PM


The answer depends on how much we risk and how much just slips through.
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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4 posted 2001-10-02 05:16 PM


I can read whatever I want to
in the words on here
But can never really be sure
if they are truth or dare

So I just go on reading  
and connect them to my own
sometimes I think I guess them right
and others I have blown...

just kidding, I read them for what they are worth and don't make them into a real happening unless otherwise told...it's safer that way *s

~Wynter

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