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Open Poetry #16

Pain

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

0 posted 2001-09-23 12:54 PM

“Pain”

Pain has overtaken my body,
Making me feel as if all of my thoughts are oddities-
Pain has broken all of my emotions into the smallest of pieces,
Leaving me to repair the damage done to my soul-
Pain leaves me in a state of confusion sometimes leading to thoughts Unpure,
It impairs my ability to think so that I can’t filter out the truths amongst the lies-
I wish this pain would vanish from within me.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-23 12:58 PM

wow, very sad.....I hope you find peace

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-09-23 07:24 AM

This piece is but a beginning of something more within you...be quiet, and hear it, and then pen it, and when it moves you to tears, share it with us....

very good, Sir...

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-09-23 11:58 AM

This is very good. I think that every feeling we have is there for a reason..if you feel pain, express it. Perhaps someone will read this, sympathize and feel better.

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

4 posted 2001-09-23 11:05 PM

What's got you in so much pain?
Let me know (smiling)!
Tight poem from a tight poet.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-09-25 09:45 PM

Hi sweet heart...I hope you arent really in pain..if you are you know I am here for you anytime, anyday..I'll ease your pain my dear friend

<3 RP

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