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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-09-20 06:37 PM



The Silence is Absorbed

When does the writing appeal
If ever there was a right word
Can you point it out for real

Words and sentences expressed
In many format, in many verses
The calmness of the silence is absorbed

The poet wonders is it really true
As the mind tells a different picture
Words seem to go by unseen

The silence is absorbed
The poet retreats in the realm of reality
Questioning the worthiness of the written

The silence is absorbed
The poet understand he is not silent
So where does he begin, and to whom shall he write
For there may be hope in his next line

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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1 posted 2001-09-22 01:59 PM


JD~
This is much too lovely to silently go away~

'So where does he begin, and to whom shall he write
For there may be hope in his next line'


Write for you and share with us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-09-22 04:09 PM



Someone has finally found the words that I thought were hidden...and you, Sir, gave them wings...

well done!

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-09-23 12:31 PM


very nice, Daniel.

Kathleen

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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