That kiss was meant for you

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Open Poetry #16

That kiss was meant for you

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-22 10:01 AM

A friend
held my hand
while I missed you
He wiped my tears away
when I cried
your name
So tender
one day
he kissed me
I frozed
as he stole
that kiss that was meant
for you.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-09-22 10:50 AM

you always manage to get so much in so little a space my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-22 07:35 PM

Walker~
A poignant little piece.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

3 posted 2001-09-22 09:11 PM

Excellent in my taste. Wonderful job.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-09-22 09:24 PM

Very nicely done!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-09-22 10:31 PM

Well, hope you smacked him good!! lol It isn't an unfamiliar scenario, you're captured it well.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-09-23 12:37 PM

Well penned. I loved the last two lines. Nice twist

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-09-23 04:03 AM

Strange to think I may have been that same kind of friend for someone once in my life. I like what you're saying here, and the questions that come up afterwards. Enjoyed.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-09-23 10:20 AM

walker - much said with so few words, very nice...

BC

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