Emotional Ties - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-19 09:33 AM

Emotional Ties

The motions bind me to your words
those thoughts that often hold me, still
if only heard from deep within
you'd know the truth, to empty fill.

In times of sadness, cleaving I,
that seem to pave a darkened path,
stretching far beyond the norm
to rest myself in worded bath.

Each time when letters cross the void
and reach this mind that craves its feel,
to filter out what harbors grief
becoming then, a touch of real.

Such ties that bind have knotted tight.
Emotions linger day and night.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-19-2001).]

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-09-19 09:37 AM

"The ties that bind have knotted tight.
Emotions linger day and night."

Truer words never spoken.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-19 09:39 AM

The motions bind me to your words
those thoughts that often hold me, still
if only heard from deep within
you'd know the truth, to empty fill.
====================

lovely poem of longing and lingering wynter...
poetically pretty phrasing, vocab, and language
the cadence added to its pleasures
well done poetess.
jm

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-09-19 11:24 AM

Songbird ...glad youstopped by thank you for your comments.

Janet Marie...long lingering, I have been..thank you Janet for the kind words...

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

4 posted 2001-09-19 01:47 PM

"to filter out what harbors grief
becoming then, a touch of real."

Very provoking lines, throughout.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 2001-09-19 01:49 PM

This is a splendid write, I will mark it for future reference. Thank you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-19 02:24 PM

Emotional Ties....the title says it all...very true words spoken ever so well. Enjoyed.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-09-21 11:00 PM

Masked Intruder ..I appreciate your choice of lines...thank you for your comments.

Gemini ..glad you enjoyed my words...thanks for reading.

Enchantress ..one can get pretty emotional reading on here, can't they..*s thank you

~Wynter

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-09-23 02:09 PM

nakdthoughts-
   Enjoyed this...

       "stretching far beyond the norm
       to rest myself in worded bath."

   Wonderful thoughts, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.