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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-12 10:30 PM


The light in my heart just dimmed
As dark sorrow invaded my mind
You left me betrayed and deserted
How could I have been so blind?

Another broken heart
Seems commonplace to me these days
The sun it may be shining
But I don't see a single ray

My soul has been all but crushed
Since you left me for someone else
It seems that you have grown tired of me
As you left me stranded all by myself

Maybe the problem I have
Is that I have too much love to give
For me love is the ultimate
Such an important reason to live

Once again I'll wish for a love
To one day come my way
That will fill my heart with happiness
And take my sadness far away

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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1 posted 2001-09-12 10:56 PM


Sue...heartaches are way too common...I hope you find a love..I enjoyed this even though it is sad..
alan

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2 posted 2001-09-12 11:46 PM


I've had my share of heart ache, I know how you feel. With time the heart does go on and you'll meet someone new and fall in love all over again. Hopefully this time that person will truely appreciate you : )
cruz
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3 posted 2001-09-15 11:33 PM


"...and you give, and you give, and you give yourself away..."

U2
With or Without You

your poem is very well written, and may your heart get well soon

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4 posted 2001-09-16 01:16 AM


Big hugs, from another who knows the pain of heartache.  I got a dog instead    Take care, and your poem was excellent as usual.

~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-09-16 01:25 AM


A sad poem, but hoping that true love comes to you in time.  Joyce
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-09-16 01:58 PM


Sometimes one is ready for love and they meet someone that just wants to play around...James
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