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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-21 05:14 AM

Stinging sands,
Wind whipped and lashing spirit,
Caught in eyes
Makes me cry,
Deep into my soul it’s sent,
Scrapes my skin,
Outside in,
Till blood trickles from the grains,
And skin burns
As seas churns,
Salt filled surf adds to the pains,
On the sands
Seas constant pounding on it.

Gloom

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-08-21 08:13 AM

Sounds like you've done your share of sitting on the beach on windy days.. 'Tis erosive for sure... and you've described it well, PG..

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-08-21 08:50 AM

Had a good case of poison ivy once, all over my legs...was taken to the seashore to dip in the ocean....curative powers....

a good write....I enjoyed this very much....

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

3 posted 2001-08-21 09:28 AM

Cleansing of cuts prevents infection - Physically and spiritually, and salt water is more effective than plain. Maybe the "No pain, no gain" applies here? I loved it.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-08-21 02:39 PM

wow, i really liked this one alot. nice read. thanks,

death is certain, life is not
Have u ever loved somebody so bad, u cry when u aren't around them, and still miss them when u r with them?~me

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-08-21 02:59 PM

I felt this!!!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-08-21 04:41 PM

Would it be safe to presume that this particular wound never heals? Well done

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

7 posted 2001-08-22 12:53 PM

~Loved the wording here. Creatively thought out. I took a peek at your site, and was enjoying a bit of your other works. Thank you. *Peace.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

8 posted 2001-08-22 06:44 AM

Thank you, Nan,
Yes I have, most recently on the outer banks.

Thank you, Sunshine,
To sting and to heal, sounds like one of those old style medicines,

Thank you, Carolina
That should actually read
Pain, and perhaps gain
just because you are in pain doesn’t insure gain.

Thank you, Spine Grinder,
Glad you enjoyed.

Thank you, Rose,
Never stop feeling

Thank you, Interloper,
Seems there’s always an open soar or two
On the soul.

Thank you, SpitFire,
I haven’t been keeping my site up like I should
I hope to improve soon.
Your words are kind

Gloom

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