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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-13 03:11 PM


In Thy Countenance

by vision’s access doth accrue
amidst this honey suckled dew
tranquility as would ensue
by heaven’s gate comes sense of you

daily matters have scored my chores
thoughts sweet scented forevermore
cling to memories open door
strumming sweeter my lonely chord

might thee conjoin this one heart’s beat
as for my love thou would entreat
once again permit thee my greet
to clutch close, my dear, in replete

oblige acceptation’s embrace
by thy visage I am thus graced


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1 posted 2001-08-13 03:21 PM


gorgeous!!  
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2 posted 2001-08-13 03:32 PM


I agree with SEA....

very nicely done..very nice indeed

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3 posted 2001-08-13 03:44 PM



Resplendent beauty, such charm and grace.

Willie

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4 posted 2001-08-13 04:39 PM


LadyInWhite~
Quite lovely~
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-08-13 04:50 PM


Oh...this was simply lovely it was!

To see real beauty ~ close your eyes and listen
   ~* Mysteria *~

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6 posted 2001-08-13 06:22 PM


Lady--Enchanting capture of old world charm.
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7 posted 2001-08-13 06:31 PM


Ahh, Lady, you know I am a sucker for those old fashioned thoughts...very good write...very gentle smile
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8 posted 2001-08-13 06:56 PM


beautiful.
oblige acceptation’s embrace
by thy visage I am thus graced

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine


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