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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-08 06:49 PM

"All Mixed Up With Love"

A comet parts the curtain night
and streaks the sky with certain light;
that holds my gaze at shows above,
and makes me think of those in love.

When nature makes and forms her art,
it never fails to warm my heart;
and if it seems so real to you,
then you know I feel so too.

I guess I'm kind of shy that way,
to think I see the sky at play;
but when I look above you see,
it's all mixed up with love to me.

Love and Sky; Sky and Love;
both are gifts from high above;
treasured things here for free,
but no one thing more dear to me.

God put all the wonders there,
to fill my heart with fun to share.
In my soul I know this true,
for in your eyes you show it too.

I guess I'm kind of shy that way,
to think I see the sky at play,
but when I look above you see,
it's all mixed up with love to me.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-08-08 07:50 PM

Moonshadow, welcome to Passions.

You wrote a very lovely verse here in nice flowing words. Thank you for sharing.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2001-08-08 09:31 PM

Moonshadow
This was such an exquisite piece of writing with such beautiful imagery. Great work.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-08-09 08:35 AM

What a lovely way to be confused...well done!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2001-08-12 12:39 PM

MoonShadow,

Love and sky...both lofty things to aspire to

This line especially moved me:

"treasured things here for free"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-08-12 12:57 PM

lovely writing...and sentiments
superb job of blending the imagery with the emotions..gave the poem the airy open sky feeling..
well done MS
jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2001-08-13 07:38 AM

very flowing and song-like, I loved it! Back to the top it goes!

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-08-13 04:16 PM

Wonderful write, moonshadow...I truly enjoyed the flow and rhyme...the imagery is delightful, too...I love it...into the library with this one!

sp

no power in creation,
no mortal complication,
will ever stop me from being with you...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-08-13 04:55 PM

MoonShadow~
I enjoyed the cadence that gave this such a delightful flow~

Quite lovely celestial thoughts~
Thanks for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2001-08-13 06:15 PM

This was fun...
Much enjoyed!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-08-13 06:46 PM

Yes, I agree, the sky, stars and moon are all part of love to me, also. Nice write. Nice name, too, Moonshadow...

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