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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2001-08-12 03:03 PM

Summer's End

Laughter in the sun
joy sounds in the heart of youth –
spring brings youth to all.

Footprints bend the grass
a soul passing by unseen –
summer wind saw it.

A single leaf falls
yellowish-gold sunlight fades –
fall flies with the geese.

Snowflakes touch the ground
pure white waves blown by the wind -
winter calls its own.

w. james beard, jr.
(c) August 2001

...hope it works..j.
[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-08-12 03:06 PM

jw, You're on fire today with haikus

You present the changing of seasons wonderfully with perfect imagery and a creative presentation~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

paladin

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2 posted 2001-08-12 03:10 PM

Yes,yes you have it.Good theme.Nice snap shots.

paladin

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3 posted 2001-08-12 06:52 PM

jwesley,

Ohhh I SOOO love these!

TaraB

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4 posted 2001-08-12 07:25 PM

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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5 posted 2001-08-12 09:16 PM

Jwesley:

I must learn how
if you can, I can

These are lovely!

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6 posted 2001-08-12 09:56 PM

Awesome, my friend.
Sandra

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