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Naked As The Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*Marge Tindal*~  Across the teasing of the night as gentle breezes blow romance I stand naked as the wind begins her gentle dance Whispered flutters feather me in gentle wisps of time Billowing soft the verses swept with quill of rhyme Mariah swirls about me so soft her gentle breeze Windy spirit of night's breath breathes poetic thought in me As naked as the wind that blows pages flutter with etch of pen I allow the soft caress as gentle message on my skin As quickly as she came she is quickly gone Mariah leaves me breathless cloaked in gentleness of wind song ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Marge!! I loved it. Great job like usual!! ~Jeff~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You've touched some of my favorites... Wind Song Mariah penning feathers and a poem from you. Yes, I do believe my day is complete now! [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-10-2001).] |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
The poem is as lovely as the song itself. Wonderful read. Thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking! Very beautiful! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--This is so beautiful...it blows me away! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeff~ Thank you very much. LadyInWhite~ Awww ! Thank you for letting me share with you. MoonShadow~ What a nice thing to say. Thank you. Denise~ You leave me *smiles* ... I thank you. Martie~ Thank you for seeing my thoughts in the wind~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
"The rain is Tess, the fire is Jove, and they call the wind Mariah." ahhh, the song was great, and you are too. Wonderful write, Marge..very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh no~ I am going to be singing this for upteen days now! I am serious - Jenna used to sing this song all the time and it stuck in our heads for years and people would actually tell us to shut the heck up!  lol, oh Marge, I needed this poem tonight and there you were! Fantastic, and look at the picture Marge (the hair)...who would figure how it all works but thank you.To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Oh, sweet is the song for sure~ Thank you dear man~  Mysteria~ I keep telling you ... she dances in gentle spirit~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've got me singing in the wind, my friend..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Ahhhhh, that would be worth hearing~ Hope you're having a wonderful day~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Marge, this is great. Your words are always so beautiful. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As Mariah left you breathless, so did your poem leave me. Exquisite! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whispered flutters feather me in gentle wisps of time Billowing soft the verses swept with quill of rhyme Mariah swirls about me so soft her gentle breeze Windy spirit of night's breath breathes poetic thought in me ============================== Have I told you lately that you ROCK ... you and your BAZILLION muses  this is wonderful poetry Margie girl jmI know no one is to blame |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maeve~ Such a lovely thing to say ... thank you. MidnightSun~ Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it. JanetMarie~ Tee-Hee ... (I think they're cloning)  Each of them brings me a treasure to share~ Thank you, sweetie~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Hon Just peeking a little WOW!!!! this is so soft, light and a fuzzy inside kind of write...well done. I hope that makes sense. ~HUGS~ to a wonderful poet Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Your words never cease to amaze me Marge! This was wonderful. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Do you have any idea how many times I've come back and read this poem, but not had time to reply?...LOTS!! Well, tonight I finally have time!  I absolutely love it...like a song floating on a cool breeze bringing relief to a hot summer's day. Just lovely, my friend. Love the music too. Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your words drift pleasantly to my ear Exquisite Liz |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear Marge, Thanks so much for sending the most beautiful breezes to us in this poem. The pic is as exquisite as your write. Just wish I Looked like her and could write like you! many smiles.Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ SO good to see your smiling face ! ! You make perfect sense to me ... come back for a peek more often, sweet lady~ EagleOne~ Thank you,dear friend. Vicky~ You give me many *smiles*  Thank you sweet friend~ Elizabeth~ Thank you. I am pleased to know you enjoyed it. RWood~ What a lovely comment~ *Sir Francis Dicksee painted her as 'Miranda', but she sure sang Mariah to me~ Thank you so much~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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