navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » So Easy
Open Poetry #15
Post A Reply Post New Topic So Easy Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
wandering glider
Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501
aloft

0 posted 2001-08-01 06:30 PM


SO EASY


So easy to walk away
or fly
pack a bag if you need to
or maybe not
maybe they were only words
that have floated off already.

Promises, they sounded like
but perhaps my ears needed cleaning.
What did you mean, by the way?
What?  Poetic license you say?
Well, I hadn't thought of that.

Not fair!
but then again
were there any rules?

So easy
for you, maybe.
    
  

       \\
~=====}:
       //

© Copyright 2001 wandering glider - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-01 06:31 PM


maybe....

nicely said... sad but nicely said..


Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-08-01 07:17 PM


perhaps too easy. . .

well done with this one. . . from the heart. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
3 posted 2001-08-01 07:20 PM


Great write...there's always loopholes, aren't there??  Nicely written, wg...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » So Easy

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary