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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
One drop of blood One pinpricked finger One oath for life One oath forever Only one From the beginning Only one Until the end Only one Sun in the sky Only one Last painful cry One is not A lonely number One dreams of one Deep in slumber Only one The light will bring Only one For me will sing Only one Lives on in me Only one There can be. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW Shannon, this is really a beautiful sensitive poem you wrote. Really touched my soul  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
ShannonM: this was a very cool concept: One is not A lonely number One dreams of one Deep in slumber I like the unique perspective to that stanza. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
yes, I like this. very good |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes nice concept..and I agree with mark about my favorite lines from this... |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Thank you for your comments...when you are alone in love, sometimes there is nothing left to do but dream... ShannonM |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very nice concept, and good flow. I liked this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Excellent write, Shannon...the flow was great and you expressed the thoughts so creatively! I love it... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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