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vandana
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0 posted 2001-08-01 10:55 AM



Just To be close to you,
Just wanted this love to go,
Go till the dawn,
Just want to say the words,
The words without a song,
Into our minds,
We only would stay closer,
Closer ,
To never let love go,
Never let love go,
As you wanted the things
to be this way,
And see the light through the day,
Just wanna to be close to you,
So close to you,
Never want you to go,
Everthing you do,
It's comes from your heart,
just wanna to feel the love
again,
Fall In love
all over again,
Just wanna feel the love again,
Just wanna to hear the song,
Once again,
Just wanna to be close to you,
just wanna to hear the song again,
the song we used to sing It together,
I wanted to feel all this again,
Because I believe It
That love would stay each day,
when we are closer
I feel that this love
Is alive again,

Just wanna to be close to you....
All the way...
no matter what
and which way  It leads us to....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 08-01-2001).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-01 11:14 AM


very nicely done...

I enjoyed!

Sven
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2 posted 2001-08-01 07:22 PM


my friend, with every word that you write, you just get better and better. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-08-01 07:30 PM


Enjoyed your poem...James
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