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Open Poetry #15

Mon Dieu!

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2001-07-31 08:55 AM

My flower, on you I am a dew,
united too, a deux,
in southern drawl, I'd hoped would ensue,
melodious consent 'ah do'
concupiscent stew,
I'd brew for you,
and now, can this be true?
my ardor undo,
in words so few,
withdrew,
did you,
Adieu!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-31 08:56 AM

(chuckling) clever write.... I enjoyed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-31 09:13 AM

My God, well and cleverly written my friend

Look in thy heart and write.
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-07-31 09:13 AM

My flower, on you I am a dew,
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what a lovely thought

love the vocab and rhyme scheme of this
as well as the format/presentation...
yes...clever indeed.
well done sir Richard...
your poetry makes me wish I spoke french

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-07-31 03:29 PM

Oh aren't you the clever one, I really enjoyed this cutie patootie.

Reel beauty is only fin deep!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-31 07:03 PM

now this is clever!!

well done my friend. . .

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