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Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-07-28 06:43 PM

I looked up
at the dark sky
and smiled.
And the dark sky
turned purple,
and smiled back to me.

Laying on the pavement
as I was,
with no reason to move
or speak or change my mood,
I breathed in slower.

And so the dark sky,
full as she was undid
her shirt and began to rain.

To which I said:
“You can’t move me!”

To which she said,
“I have.”

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-28 06:47 PM

Well, this moves me! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2001-07-28 07:19 PM

What a wonderful first posting...I look forward to many more! Welcome!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-28 07:19 PM

Nice writing from planet earth Samia...James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-07-28 07:59 PM

Samia, and this moves me. Beautiful!

Welcome!

Maree

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

5 posted 2001-07-28 08:48 PM

Hi everyone, thanks for the kind words and warm welcomes. I'm glad I found this place.
Cheers!
Samia

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-07-28 11:28 PM

Samia~
Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions !
A delightfully charming entry you've made.
Most enjoyable~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

7 posted 2001-07-29 12:18 PM

I enjoyed this very much...nice first post! A hello from a fellow newbie..*S*

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-07-29 12:22 PM

Great first post, Samia. Will be watching for more. Welcome!

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

9 posted 2001-07-29 12:31 PM

There's no arguing with nature!

Lovely first post. I definitely look forward to reading more! Welcome to Passions

~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2001-07-29 01:50 AM

And so the dark sky,
full as she was undid
her shirt and began to rain.
=================================

what a very cool image and metaphor!!
Welcome to poetry land Samia,
I too look forward to more of your work,
nice to have you here with us

jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-07-30 12:22 PM

Welcome to passions. I look forward to more of your work

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

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