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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-27 10:23 AM

Still waiting...
for those first steps, sounds
caught on the breeze
of a summer's day.

Your eyes...
confessing need,
painting my body erotic,
sifting through memories.

Watching you...
with a hint of mind shadows,
wrapping myself up
in remembering when.

Caught up...
in the addicted to,
escaping into kisses
of a love forgotten.

I'd walk away...
into tomorrow
saving the last dance
for only you.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-27 10:29 AM

I love this

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-07-27 10:29 AM

Lovely thoughts, Wynter...

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-07-27 10:31 AM

Watching you...
with a hint of mind shadows,
wrapping myself up
in remembering when.

Caught up...
in the addicted to,
escaping into kisses
of a love forgotten.

Must be something in the air this morning...loved this!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-27 10:40 AM

quite wonderful!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-27 11:19 AM

Still waiting...
for those first steps, sounds
caught on the breeze
of a summer's day.

Your eyes...
confessing need,
painting my body erotic,
sifting through memories.

Watching you...
with a hint of mind shadows,
wrapping myself up
in remembering when.
lady... you do express it well.. very nicely done!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-28 11:14 AM

when read with the . . . in place. . . this just sings. . .

I love it Wynter. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-07-28 12:30 PM

loved the softness to this, hey! how are you anyway?

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-07-28 02:20 PM

Ahh,so very well done...a pleasure to open up this morning..very gentle smile

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-07-28 10:48 PM

Beautiful indeed!

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2001-07-29 01:12 AM

Very well done GF...I especially enjoyed the last stanza...melancholy, yet beautiful.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2001-07-29 01:34 AM

Oh my, so lovely and bittersweet, if only you knew how much this speaks of my life right now

Melissa~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-07-30 12:19 PM

Save the next to last dance for me

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

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