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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-26 10:54 AM

A Small Thought

Every pore of me
listens
with the feel of your touch,
cries
the time spent apart,
cradles
you in memories arms
of each night.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-26 10:57 AM

This truly says volumes in a few short lines. Absolutely a stunning piece, Wynter, stunning.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-07-26 11:03 AM

Thank you Virginia..just one of those moods this morning

huggs
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-26 11:03 AM

yes this one may be titled small thought...but it encompasses a geat deal of feeling and emotion in just a few words...

I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-07-26 11:07 AM

Hey C, thank you and good morning..nice to see you. I have been a little off-beat lately and not responding or writing much. I think it's this heat and humidity *s

~Wynter

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-26 11:08 AM

Wynter~
Such large thoughts in a tiny presentation.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-26 11:09 AM

Yeah..well the heat and humidity are stifling at times..and wear the soul down it seems.. stay cool..and stay around..miss reading your words...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-07-26 11:18 AM

Thanks Marge...you are so sweet...

~smiling
And C...if you could see me now, dripping with moisture..but I am and have been working on a poem or two..I just can't get them finished at the moment and want them to be completed before posting...

huggs to you both,
~Wynter

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-07-26 11:28 AM

we had that weather the last two weeks..but it cooled of yesterday and tried to rain...
today the high is supposed to be around 85.a real break from the heat index of 110 115.

now you have to admit... dripping moisture can be quite the seductive line or image ( laughing)

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

9 posted 2001-07-26 01:35 PM

The quiet pours in,
Seeping,
Exchanging with sweat,
A clock tick,
Or a drip,
Time moves with the beat.

Enjoyed yours,
With short lines of long meanings.

Gloom

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