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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-07-26 08:42 AM



Head In The Clouds
~*~
Sprawl out on green grass
images float in white fluff
grab the spinning earth
~*~

BloomingRose

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RSWells
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1 posted 2001-07-26 08:44 AM


Easy to forget we're always moving. Good to know there's time to rest aground. Enjoyed.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

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2 posted 2001-07-26 09:11 AM


yes..it is easy to forget we are moving...

nice images..I enjoyed

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3 posted 2001-07-26 09:14 AM


Blooming Rose,
Nice and fluffy, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2001-07-26 09:15 AM



Smiling!

Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-07-26 10:18 AM



Very nice  

Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-07-26 10:39 AM


lovely Deb..i came across a site yesterday..a photographer who took pics of clouds...he had one he called the energizer bunny..it looked just like it ha..

          ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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7 posted 2001-07-26 10:56 AM


just lovely *s

~Wynter

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...Pope John Paul II



VAS
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8 posted 2001-07-26 11:00 AM


beautiful, love that last line especially!

sometimes it does feel like we need to grab the spinning earth, especially when we have our heads in the clouds

this, along with its beauty, has a wonderful delight to it, well done!!!

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2001-07-26 01:14 PM


RS~ Thank you. Yes it's easy to forget we are constantly moving.

Cpat~ Thank you.
Looking out my window I was reminded of childhood days of clutching the ground, flat on my back, imagining what the clouds were really made of.

Seymour~ Thank you. Glad you found some fluff here.  

Lady~  

Melissa~ Thank you.  

Victoria~ Thanks. I would like to see an energizer bunny. What an imagination!

Wynter~  

VAS~ Thank you. Sometimes just like taking the time to smell a rose, we need to look at the wonder in the heavens. Such freedom.

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 07-26-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-08-01 04:47 AM


your title caught me in

love clouds...loved this

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2001-08-01 09:11 AM


faterider~ Thanks!  
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