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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-07-30 09:28 AM



~*~
As the water slides down the mountain peaks
and liquid shadow’s cover the land,
the silent sky gives up it’s light,
as  God’s music is poured from his hand

Nature plays her  melody
upon solemn rocks and gazing  trees,
in shadows rest hidden secrets slowly rise
as dancing silhouettes appear  
wrapped in their golden magic dance
embraced in the miracle of a mountain night
~*~


BloomingRose


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SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-30 09:34 AM


big smiles here   love that picture, and your poem is beautiful!  
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-07-30 09:39 AM


BloomingRose,
You have painted a Renoir of words.

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-07-30 10:24 AM


very nice imagery and image to go with your poem..

I enjoyed

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-07-30 10:28 AM


SEA~ Thank you sweet friend  

Seymour~ Thank you so much, what a nice comment.  


vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-30 01:24 PM



Deb-
   I'm so glad I caught this one before it
   slipped on by me.
   Absolutely lovely, my friend...got me smiling.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Spine Grinder
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6 posted 2001-07-30 01:33 PM


wow.....just wow....

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-07-30 06:15 PM


Enchanting song, Deb.  Beautifully played.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2001-07-30 06:52 PM


Cpat~ Thank you.  

Vicky~ Thank you, I am glad this made you smile.

Spine~ Thank you much.  


Lone Wolf~ Good to know you liked this too.
Thank you.

Sven
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9 posted 2001-07-30 07:08 PM


Deb, this is quietly delicate. . . a wonderful poem. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

cpalmer
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10 posted 2001-07-30 07:26 PM


Deb
This is quite beautiful...Im glad I stopped to read it!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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11 posted 2001-07-30 10:11 PM


Deb~

What a lovely portrait of images you paint for us, that graphic enhances your enchanting words wonderfully.
You know, Ellie LeJeune writes some fantastic fairy poetry, I know that she will enjoy your poem    I'll email her the link~

Melissa~

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2001-07-30 10:50 PM


Sven~ Glad you find this a peaceful read.

Cindi~ Thank you so much for stopping by...  

Melissa~ So glad you enjoyed. I hope ellie likes this too.
That's what it's all about, writing and sharing.

ellie LeJeune
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13 posted 2001-07-31 05:34 PM


Rose; This is so enchantingly lovely! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

catalinamoon
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14 posted 2001-07-31 06:27 PM


Very lovely, Rose..
Sandra

BloomingRose
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15 posted 2001-07-31 06:57 PM


ellie and Sandra, I thank you much for your sweet reply.  

Deb

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16 posted 2001-07-31 10:31 PM


I Loved the imagery in this.  Wonderful write.
BloomingRose
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17 posted 2001-08-01 09:36 AM


Poe~ Thank you so much.  It's that magical time of year for lightning bugs, and lively imaginings.   Glad you enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 08-01-2001).]

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