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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-07-24 06:51 AM


shimmer
glimmer
milky way
attitude
she ice skates
in stilletto
(wears lip gloss)
abstains from stains
in champagne gloss
dancing on the emerald grass---
pirouette of pain in ass.


"Oh tell me." I am something new;
something grand,in growth of sun.
Let me sing like no one else
and have more fun than anyone.
Tell me that
it is just me
assure me
that the blind will see;
tell me, tell me,
anything--
today, I will believe.



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1 posted 2001-07-24 08:24 AM


Oh tell me." I am something new;
something grand,in growth of sun.
Let me sing like no one else
and have more fun than anyone.
Tell me that
it is just me
assure me
that the blind will see;
tell me, tell me,
anything--
today, I will believe.
Love this as  an expression of what we feel...

I am impressed..as usual

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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2 posted 2001-07-24 08:28 AM


wooo hooo this was sooooooo very wonderful! enjoyed your style as always...you are amazing!...aloha, Koko

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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3 posted 2001-07-25 02:29 AM


If I tell you that you are "something else" would you believe it?  Well, you are, that was just great!

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

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4 posted 2001-07-26 01:19 PM


Just wonderful ... and always believe.
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5 posted 2001-07-26 01:21 PM


You are a unique and utterly wonderful person who has more gifts to share with the world than you can possibly know

How's that???  

I love this. . . I love the feeling behind it. . . such freedom of expression and such total abandon. . . why can't we feel this way all the time????

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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