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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-07-20 01:05 PM



The taste of tears, on your lips,
tells a tale within.
Every reason, meets their needs,
and to your heart does lend.

The hint of salt, within each tear,
is masked with a feeling.
A little tears, or a lot of tears,
at some point will come stealing.

Some times sad, some times mad,
but always with emotion.
To say that one never cries,
is just a foolish notion.

Cleansing tears, bitter tears,
tears of pain and strife.
Joyous tears, and loving tears,
in some way fills our life.

So when you feel the need to cry,
always remember this.
What ever your reason for crying,
shed them ! They won't be missed !

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-20 01:20 PM


excellent advise
beautifully woven


if a water heater
didn't have a safety valve
we'd all be in a world of hurt
for when the pressure built enough
the dam would surely burst


Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
2 posted 2001-07-20 01:59 PM


This was beautifully written. There seems to be alot of feeling in it.
God Bless & Great Job!!!

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

illusion
Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

3 posted 2001-07-20 02:21 PM


But how can I lower my salt intake when I keep tasting tears? Mine seem to overflow at nothing and everything.   I like this - very well written.
shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
4 posted 2001-07-20 02:37 PM


Beautfully written, let them flow!!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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