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jess burstyn
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0 posted 2001-07-14 08:30 PM




         Postpartum Pilgrimage


The house awakened in those pre-dawn hours
when at her breast engorged its tiny tsar,
demanding to fulfill his avaricious will,
or shrill at ursurpation of his powers.

These were the best of busy times, by far;
his primal need which she alone could fill
became nutrition for her own self-worth
and fueled fantasies that magnified
while contemplating what he'd grow to be.

Perhaps a farmer who would work the earth,
to weed, to watch his sowing multiplied,
with winding rows, as far as eyes would see;
an architect of noble monuments,
his sphinx outlasting man's millennia;

a lawyer, teacher, doctor who would serve  
without his monetary recompense
consuming life, a schizophrenia,
giving warring owning; a prince with nerve
enough to love those governed more than life
his fame or wealth; an honest judge, or priest
devoted to both God and woeful man.

Her choice?  That in this life he'd love one wife,
the multiplier of his seed at least
tenfold, and he be hero to their clan.  
                                                                                                                    --jess burstyn                                                        


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-07-14 08:49 PM


welcome to Passions and I'm going for a glass of milk  

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

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2 posted 2001-07-15 11:32 AM


this is wonderful!
the dreams a mother dreams
of that wonderful babe at suckle

lovely
heart-touching

Welcome!!!  


Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-07-16 09:45 AM


This is a strong and wonderfully wrought poem.  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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4 posted 2001-07-16 10:28 AM


nicely written... I enjoyed the read and the thoughts...

welcome to passions..

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-07-16 11:16 AM


Welcome to us, rhyming friend.
Enjoyed the read.

Titia

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