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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-14 01:34 AM



Barefooting~

~*Marge Tindal*~

Wading through your thoughts
Don't even need galoshes
How shallow is that ?



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-07-14 01:48 AM


Small minds need teaching
To be deep as the ocean
But are they worth it?

vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-07-14 01:51 AM



Marge-
  WOW!!  This is harsh...I like it! LOL
  I know a few people who fit this
  very well...too well..  
  You know what they say...'Some people
  get lost in thought because it's
  unfamiliar territory for them.'..lol

  love ya, my friend..  
  ~vicky


  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-14-2001).]

cpalmer
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3 posted 2001-07-14 01:55 AM


Wow marge
Brutal...but cool!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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Paula~
LOL !  Believe me, this one wasn't !

Vicky~
Just LOVE it !
You just had to be there, gal !

Cindi~
Perhaps a little cynical~
But, trust me ... it was a vacant lot !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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5 posted 2001-07-14 09:03 AM



deepest chuckles rose
when this ditty caught my eye
led to bellylaugh

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6 posted 2001-07-14 10:19 AM


Ahh, Marge, gentle one???, remind me NOT to get on your bad list..gentle smile
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7 posted 2001-07-14 05:02 PM


Ha!

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

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8 posted 2001-07-14 05:06 PM


Maybe you were standing on a sand bar. I'll bet those boots will come in handy if you walk around a bit!!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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9 posted 2001-07-14 05:15 PM


I KNEW you would dedicate a poem to me some day!!  
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-07-14 09:17 PM


Karilea~
I LOVE IT !

Logan~
Don't have one of those.
Just a little puddle-jumping !

Mysteria~
LOL !  You know ...

Shadow~
Don't need boots for this particularly shallow pool.
Thanks for the reply.

Balladeer~
ROFGMFO !  
I'd need a life raft to navigate your brain waves !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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